For this week we were doing a time we had to wait. This was a fun thing to do. my friends and I commented on each others work so we can change it and make it better. Its a time were we were bored so we had to entertain our self. Here is my work.
The Time I Waited
When I was a boy my:
Dad asked do you
want to come into
the Supermarket. I said no
I will be good
sitting in the car.
drawing on
the window bored.
98 cars go past
counting them in my head.
I thought they won't
be long. I count more cars.
Hours pass
Having a sleep seems
like a good idea.
Woken up by a
loud truck
They are back at last!
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