Friday 14 October 2016

Writing Reflection W1T4

Writing

For writing this week we did an explanation my explanation was about my Nana's cat Cleo she is the best cat! here is a little clip of my writing. Click here to read the whole explanation.

2 comments:

  1. Hello Sebastian.
    I really like your literacy post about you Nana's cat but maybe you could write a bit more or stop fidgeting in the video. Other than that it is a really good post.
    Nou hoki faka apa apa(Yours Sincerely)
    Sam.

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  2. Morena Sebastian
    Your writing post is an awesome post about your Nana's cat maybe do more writing.How old is your Nana's cat and how many does she got
    Na Cassidy

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